Many events have occurred within history to cause major alterations
in the United States’ mentality. Some such examples include Pearl Harbor and
the Civil Rights’ movement. But most quintessentially, 9/11 stands to be the
most traumatic event in recent American history. In retrospect, this momentary engagement
in terror has forever corrugated America’s perspective. Do we truly live free from
domestic attacks? Do our decisions, made millions of miles away, truly affect
us here? And will we ever change?
Written only three days after the attack, John Updike’s
article illustrated most passionately 9/11. With his graceful quotes such as “it
fell straight down like an elevator” and “much rehearsed moments from a
nightmare ballet”, the reader encounters a plethora of new similes and
metaphors to paint the author’s true impression. Detachment. Updike watched the
sturdiest buildings in New York crumble like two clumsy ballerinas; he observed
in awe as the unattainable shores of his beloved U.S.A. burned like dry grass
near lightning. No precise words could describe what he had viewed. His mental disablement
forced the crippled novelist to write in concrete ideas he knew could exist
such as elevators and ballets. Through his similes he could describe the incomprehensible
events of 9/11.
After his original perplexity, the author begins his blind
rage. He speaks of “war” and “destruction that defies belief” precariously
forgetting the years of pain we can’t seem to stop inflicting in the Middle
East. Similar Iranians, Iraqis, Afghans, Egyptians, Libyans, and Syrians ask why they
have the “mundane duties of survivors”. “Future kamikaze pilots” aren't
necessarily formed within Florida schools, but the bombs and missiles that fall
on these Middle Eastern nations are without a doubt made in the U.S.
Just as Susan Sontag’s article tells, this unilateral
perspective is “unworthy of a mature democracy”. American citizens can’t let
themselves be led in unnecessary wars and foreign attacks (such as in Iraq)
because of a traumatic event and sanctimonious denouncement of all terrorists.
We must bear the burden of reality to end the inappropriate intervention of the
United States in the world.
In reality, the United States has never been safe from
attack. As seen in Pearl Harbor and 9/11, the decisions we make miles away truly
affect us. And the only way we can protect ourselves is by informing ourselves and
listening to both sides. Only after this can the United States truly change and
grow from 9/11.
I completely agree with your statement of "No precise words could describe what he had viewed." He used similes and metaphors to describe his passion. The vocabulary you used in this article was eccentric and interesting and made your argument more legitimate.
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